英语周报七年级本期四开，六版，第二期2023-2024学年。

英语周报七年级本期四开，六版，第二期2023-2024学年。

最近科学家研究发现，现在的年轻人走路很少，这对于他们的健康不利。现在请你把这个发现和专家的建议写成一篇英语短文，以提醒身边的人们要重视运动，关注健康。以下是短文的内容：

[写作内容]

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

英语周报七年级本期四开，六版，第二期2023-2024学年。试题答案

A magazine called The Researchers conducted a survey among 2000 people on their walking time. As is shown in the survey, a quarter of young adults aged between 18 and 24 walk no more than 5 minutes on average a day. Many people blame technology development for keeping them from walking while some young people owe the inadequate walking time to the lack of companion to walk with. Based on what is surveyed, experts suggest walking more everyday instead of taking the car or bus all the time. Moreover, it will be better for people to have extra 20-minute walk every day, which is believed to help reduce the risk of many diseases, including heart disease and stroke.

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A quarter of（one in four of/25 percent of/ one fourth of） young adults aged between 18 and 24 only walk an average of five minutes a day, according to The Researchers that surveyed 2,000 people. Most of the young people blamed technology development for keeping them from walking. Another reason given by young adults for not walking was that they don’t have anyone to walk with. The experts suggest having a daily walk instead of taking the car or bus all the time. Adding just 20 minutes walking every day can reduce the risk of many diseases, which includes heart disease and stroke.

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。

【亮点说明】范文使用一些多变的高级句式，如定语从句的使用As is shown in the survey, a quarter of young adults aged between 18 and 24 walk no more than 5 minutes on average a day.和Moreover, it will be better for people to have extra 20-minute walk every day, which is believed to help reduce the risk of many diseases, including heart disease and stroke.和Adding just 20 minutes walking every day can reduce the risk of many diseases, which includes heart disease and stroke.及非谓语动词Based on what is surveyed, experts suggest walking more everyday instead of taking the car or bus all the time.等；高级词汇和短语的灵活运用，如blame … for …，reduce the risk of等

考点：考查提纲作文。

Hundreds of people, policemen and civilians included, have got injured as a result of the political _______ in Hong Kong.

A. conflict B. reform

C. progress D. demand

英语周报七年级本期四开，六版，第二期2023-2024学年。试题答案

A

【解析】

试题分析：考查名词辨析 A. conflict矛盾；B. reform 改革；C. progress 进步；D. demand 要求；句意：作为香港政治矛盾的结果，许多的民众包括警察和市民都受伤了。根据题意选A项。

考点 : 考查名词辨析

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