高二牛津英语周报答案2023-2024第十一期A版

高二牛津英语周报答案2023-2024第十一期A版

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Sarah Hughes won the gold medal in women’s figure skating at the 2002 Winter Olympics. A graduate of Yale University, she is writing her first book. She owes her success to her parents’ support.

“I started skating when I was 3 years old. Competing in the Olympic Games had been my dream from the beginning. When I was 12 years old, my mother was hospitalized with breast cancer. I was on the way to making my first national team. Seeing my excitement at each stage gave her strength through her illness. On days when she was too weak to walk, she would think, ‘I have to make it through. I have to be there for my kids.’ My mom was able to leave the hospital to come to Philadelphia from New York to watch me win the Junior Ladies title. That day I was skating for more than just the judges. My parents’ support made all the difference when I performed on the skating stage. When I won the Olympic medal, I was able to share more than just my skating experience with the people who were with me all along. I was raised in a stable, supportive environment.”

[写作内容]

1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2．以约120个词就＂父母的支持＂这一话题谈谈你的看法，内容包括:

(1)父母的支持对我们健康成长的重要性；

(2)讲述生活中父母对你的一次重要支持；

(3)感谢父母的支持。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

高二牛津英语周报答案2023-2024第十一期A版试题答案

Sarah shows great gratitude to her parents because her parents provided her with great support in her skating career. She holds the view that it was her parents’ support that made her succeed.

As for me, I totally agree with Sarah. There is no doubt that parents’ support plays an important part in our daily life. They spare no effort to make us live a better life and their support gives us the courage to face all the difficulties in our life and studies.

Sarah’s experience reminds me of something unforgettable that my parents did for me many years ago. When I was in primary school, I was quite shy and had great difficulty communicating with my classmates. Therefore, I often felt lonely and had no interest in school life. After my parents learnt about this they tried their best to encourage me to talk to my classmates and teachers. It was with their help and support that I eventually overcame my shyness and built up confidence. Now, I really appreciate their support and I would like to say thanks to them from my bottom of heart.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求使用约30个词来概括短文的主要内容，然后以120个词就“父母的支持”谈谈自己的看法。写作要点包括：父母的支持对健康成长的重要性；讲述生活中父母对的一次重要支持；感谢父母的支持。写作中不能出现拼写和标点错误，多使用一些高级词汇和重点语法。

亮点说明：范文注意使用As for me, Therefore, Now等来衔接上下文；

范文使用了一些重点语法知识：原因状语从句because her parents provided her with great support；同位语从句that it was her parents’ support that made her succeed；强调句型it was her parents’ support that made her succeed，It was with their help and support that I eventually overcame my shyness；时间状语从句When I was in primary school，After my parents learnt about this；固定句型There is no doubt that parents’ support plays an important part in our daily life.；定语从句that my parents did for me many years ago等，语法知识运用娴熟；

范文使用了较多的固定短语和搭配：shows great gratitude to；agree with；spare no effort to do；live a better life；reminds me of；built up；had great difficulty communicating with my classmates；had no interest in；tried their best to do；encourage me to do；would like to do；from my bottom of heart等，使作文显得充实，有说服力；

范文还使用了一些高级词汇：gratitude, unforgettable, appreciate等，显示了较高的写作水平。

考点：材料类作文

短文改错

Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

高二牛津英语周报答案2023-2024第十一期A版试题答案

1.importance

2.waited 后加for

3.past-passed

4.feet–foot

5.when-than

6.the –a

7.other–. another

8.do—did

9.put后it去掉

10.losing

【解析】

试题分析：耐心在我们生活中非常重要。一天我在等公共汽车，三十分钟过去了，没有汽车出现。我又着急又恼火，决定步行去。但是我刚一离开汽车就到了。如果我等下班车的话还要再等半小时，通过这件事我意识到了自己存在的问题，现在无论什么时候我想发火，我都会想想那件事给我的教训。

1. importance 考查名词。Patience is of great important in our daily life. 介词of后面应该跟名词做宾语，故把important改为importance。

2.waited后加for 考查介词。Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Wait是不及物动词，跟宾语时需要加介词for。

3. past-passed 考查动词。30 minutes past, but no bus came. But连接两个并列句，所以30 minutes后是谓语动词，而past是介词，所以把past改为passed。

4.. feet– foot 考查名词。Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. 固定短语：on foot“步行”，故把feet改为foot。

5.when-than 考查连词。But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. 固定句型：no sooner …..than“刚一….就，所以把when改为than。

6.a— the 考查冠词。If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. 根据句意可知此处是特指下班车，应该用定冠词，把a改为the。

7.another 30 minutes 考查代词。If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. 固定表达：another +数字+复数名词，意思是“又几个，再几个”，而用other则顺序为：数字+other +名词，故把other改为another。

8. did I realize 考查动词时态。Only then do I realize my problem.。故事讲述的是过去发生的事情，应该用一般过去时，所以把do改为did。

9.. put后it去掉 考查定语从句。Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. That引导定语从句，在从句中做宾语，而 it在句中也做put的宾语，所以成分重复，把it去掉。

10. losing 考查非谓语动词。Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience. Be close to “差一点，几乎”，短语中介词to是介词，后面用名词或动名词，故把lose改为losing。

考点：考查短文改错

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