高一外研英语周报2023-2024第6期初中总复习

高一外研英语周报2023-2024第6期初中总复习

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写信目的；

2.对这些行为进行批评；

3.提出建议

注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。

June 8,2011-6-8

Dear Meadmaster,

I’m Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior Ⅱ. ________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Your faithfully,

Li Yue

高一外研英语周报2023-2024第6期初中总复习试题答案

见解析

【解析】参考范文：

une 8,2011-6-8

Dear Mr.Headmaster,

I’m Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior Ⅱ.I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students：littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Your faithfully,

Li Yue

近年微博(microblog)在中国越来越流行。假设你是校报记者，请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文，写作要点：

微博为我们生活所带来的的便利等优点

微博的缺点

个人观点或建议。

注意：词数80字以上；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

高一外研英语周报2023-2024第6期初中总复习试题答案

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。我们所要做的就是把已给中文内容翻译成英文。需要注意文中要点缺一不可。另外注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章内容。要求句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【亮点说明】文章使用了关联词：Besides, However,还使用了很好的短语和句子：give away 泄漏，All in all总之, provides us with提供某人某物， as well as和…也…， It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. it provides a chance for people to release their stress. 这两句话都用了it做形式主语， microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.这句话用了省略句。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达

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