安徽省英语周报高三新课程2021_2022第六期答案

安徽省英语周报高三新课程2021_2022第六期答案

假如你是英才中学高三(6)班的李华，上周你们班在学校食堂值班时看到一些学生浪费食物的现象。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你们帮助食堂减少食物浪费的过程。

注意：1．词数120-150左右

2．食堂cafeteria

作文解析

安徽省英语周报高三新课程2021_2022第六期答案试题答案

One possible version:：

Last week , our class was on duty in the cafeteria for student self-management. On the first day ,I was shocked to see so much leftover food thrown away by students, what a waste! Being concerned about it , my classmates and I had a beated discussion on how to solve the problem. Lots of good ideas came up, such as holding class meetings, putting up wall newspapers and changing a fine for wasting food . finally , we all agreed that wall newspaper would be the best choice.

The next day , we put our idea into reality. Towards lunch time, we put up a wall newspaper outside the school cafeteria, calling on students not to waste food . many students gathered around to read and expressed their support. To my great delight, there were changes soon, in the cafeteria, I found the trays returned after lunch all empty without any leftover, food was saved and the dining hall was cleaner. seeing this ,I felt relieved and proud of what we had done.

【解析】

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，写的是在学校食堂值班时看到一些学生浪费食物的现象，根据图画内容叙述帮助减少这种现象，减少食物浪费。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如be shocked to see so much leftover food thrown away(be shocked to do sth 因为。。。而感到震惊，see + 宾语 + done 表被动) ，what a waste ! 感叹句calling on students not to waste food（call on sb to do sth 呼吁某人做某事）！To my great delight使我非常高兴的是（to one’s + 名词，使某人。。。的是 ），seeing this ,I felt relieved and proud of what we had done.（ doing 做状语，feel + done 感到。。。be proud of 以。。。为自豪 what引导的名词性从句）等。

考点：看图作文写作。

短文改错，假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Good morning, everyone. It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend together in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of time, but we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! Thank you.

安徽省英语周报高三新课程2021_2022第六期答案试题答案

1.第二句：real—really

2.第二句：weekend—weekends

3.第四句：去掉but

4.第四句：去掉第二个a

5.第五句：去掉much

6.第五句：第二个and—but

7.第六句：his—their

8.第六句：interested—interesting

9.第七句：us后加have

10.第八句：see—seeing

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考点：考查短文改错

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