英语周报高一牛津综合答案2023-2024第21期。

英语周报高一牛津综合答案2023-2024第21期。

短文改错，此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Eric,

I’m glad to accept your e-mail . After the college entrance 1._______________

examination , I will have long summer vacation . I would like 2.________________

to plan my vacation as follow . 3._______________

First of all , I’d like to take a driving course because of 4._______________

driving is considered to be a must in modern society . Beside, 5._______________

I would like to become a volunteer teacher in a rural area so 6._______________

that I can put that I have learned to good use by helping kids. 7._______________

To tell the truth , I eager to make a long journey to some 8._______________

remote places and explore new cultures , and I don’t want to 9._______________

travel at my parents expenses. 10.________________

Wish you all the best .

Yours,

Li Lei

英语周报高一牛津综合答案2023-2024第21期。试题答案

1. accept—receive

2. 加 a

3. follows

4.去掉of

5.Besides

6. 正确

7. that —what

8. 加 am

9.and—but

10. parents’

【解析】

试题分析：

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10.这里表示但是我不想花我父母的钱去旅行，所以parents — parents’。

考点：考查短文改错

某海外学校举办英语训练营，开设了以下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking），防身术（self-defense），护理（nursing ）。假设你是李华，写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。

内容要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程；2. 你期望从中学到什么；3.为什么想学这些内容

Dear sir /madam,

Li Hua

英语周报高一牛津综合答案2023-2024第21期。试题答案

Dear sir /madam,

I am very glad that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defense, nursing and so on.

I want to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers, grasses etc since I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature. For one thing, I want to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. For another, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasure plants much more consequently. What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】考察应用文

【写作指导】

本文属于应用文写作，要求写一封申请信，报名参加一项课程。使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1. 你感兴趣的课程：园艺；2.希这个课程让我了解到更多与园艺有关的知识。3.为什么想学这些内容：期望园艺能够帮助我在大学里的专业学的更好，而且未来自己也想从事于园艺有关的事业；

写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。

【一句多译】

而且，毕业以后，我计划把我的时间花在种植花草，让我们的祖国更加漂亮吸引更多的人来参观。

①[What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state, attracting more foreigners to come to visit it.

②What‘s more, after graduation, I plan to devote my life to cultivate flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state to attract more foreigners to come to visit it.

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